I have been enjoying your work for some time, this story is no exception, but the layout of the story feels a little disjointed and the text is tiny even in full screen. The only thing I recommend with longer stories is maybe just make them stories under the picture as opposed to in/around the Picture.
I loved the amount of detail in this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Been having a craving to revisit some of my longer form stories, just don't have the time of late.
DeleteI have been enjoying your work for some time, this story is no exception, but the layout of the story feels a little disjointed and the text is tiny even in full screen. The only thing I recommend with longer stories is maybe just make them stories under the picture as opposed to in/around the Picture.
ReplyDeleteStill love your stuff!
Good story & pic, LOL OUCH!
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